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The Inner Sanctum
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slimboydim
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| Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:50 pm Haiku Thread |
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Good Evening All, saw this on a Poetry
forum, seemed to work well.
Someone starts with a Haiku. The next
person to post a Haiku, uses the last line
of the previous Haiku, as the first line of theirs.
If that seems confusing (Read it again Sally!!!)
its not at all...my last line will be your first line.
Here Goes:
This Haiku game is,
Easier than you may think.
Now use this line first.
Kindest Regards Slim. |
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blueangel
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| Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:57 pm Re: Haiku Thread |
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slimboydim wrote: Good Evening All, saw this on a Poetry
forum, seemed to work well.
Someone starts with a Haiku. The next
person to post a Haiku, uses the last line
of the previous Haiku, as the first line of theirs.
If that seems confusing (Read it again Sally!!!)
its not at all...my last line will be your first line.
Here Goes:
This Haiku game is,
Easier than you may think.
Now use this line first.
Kindest Regards Slim.
Now use this line first?
No, not THAT line, that's silly!
Try THIS line instead!
Love Sally XXX |
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slimboydim
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| Fri Sep 15, 2006 9:09 pm |
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Try this line instead,
"Blue eyed girl with dark brown hair"
The story begins
Regards Slim. |
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jjpet
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| Sat Sep 16, 2006 1:19 pm |
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The story begins
Blue-eyed brunette laughing but
What is so funny? |
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blueangel
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| Sun Sep 17, 2006 4:15 pm |
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What is so funny?
Only she knows the answer
And she's not telling! |
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kerry
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| Sun Sep 17, 2006 5:22 pm |
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not done one before
thanks sally xx
And she's not telling!
she might so you can laugh too
Do you want to know? |
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slimboydim
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| Sun Sep 17, 2006 5:55 pm |
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Do you want to know?
What has caused such merriment,
She's about to tell.
Regards Slim. |
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blueangel
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| Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:59 pm |
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she's about to tell
Our blue-eyed girl has new friends
She is so happy
A joint effort by Kerry and Sally!!!!! |
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kerry
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| Sun Sep 17, 2006 7:13 pm |
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blueangel wrote: she's about to tell
Our blue-eyed girl has new friends
She is so happy
A joint effort by Kerry and Sally!!!!!
thank you sally xx |
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kerry
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| Tue Sep 19, 2006 12:32 am |
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She is so happy
Will they be friends for ever?
I'd like to think so |
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slimboydim
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| Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:52 pm |
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Well Done Kerry. 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)
I'd like to think so
But, who can you really trust?
Will she be deceived?
Kindest Regards Slim. |
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kerry
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| Tue Sep 19, 2006 10:56 pm |
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slimboydim wrote: Well Done Kerry. 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)
I'd like to think so
But, who can you really trust?
Will she be deceived?
Kindest Regards Slim.
thank you slim
i am getting there :) |
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dragonpoe
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| Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:15 pm |
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*hope I am doing this right*
Will she be deceived
in the shadows of doubt and love
Longing, wanting, girl...
don't really like that, but wasn't sure what else to write!
:)
~Poe |
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slimboydim
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| Wed Sep 20, 2006 7:48 pm |
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Longing wanting girl
Reaches out to new lover
Her heart beats quickly
Kindest Regards Slim. |
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kerry
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| Thu Sep 21, 2006 4:42 pm |
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her heart beats quickly
is this going to be love?
let us wait and see |
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