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kerry



Wed Jun 13, 2007 5:14 pm    

dragonpoe wrote: Slim - well done. Love the ending. I haven't been tapping into my dark ink well lately, yours may have inspired me.

kerry - how creative!! Taking your poem, I can spin a tale of classic late night creep fests!!

Loved all of them.
:)
~Poe

Thanks poe
you can take it and spin whatever you like with it 8)
 
slimboydim
Guest


Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:22 pm    

Good Evening All, this weeks
Subject is "Paradox"

Dragonpoe was kind enough to
come up with this, Thank You. 8)
 
slimboydim
Guest


Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:43 pm    

Good Afternoon All, the first efforts
in this were fantastic. Thank You.

If anyone who doesnt normally post
Poems would like to try their hand.
Please feel free to do so.

Just a reminder this weeks will be...

Paradox.
 
blueangel
Guest


Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:15 pm    

Thank you. Slim XXX I think it's a great idea...just what we need to blow the cobwebs away!

Paradox?....where's my dictionary!!!

Love Sally XxXxX
 
dragonpoe
Guest


Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:22 pm    

Leave it to me to pick something difficult!
:)
 
blueangel
Guest


Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:23 pm    

Hehe!! well it's certainly a challenge!!

See ya later...Brain time!!

Love Sally XxX
 
kerry
Guest


Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:56 pm    

going to miss this one out sorry poe :(
 
dragonpoe
Guest


Fri Jun 15, 2007 12:01 am    

ok, so this was a bit harder than I thought. I'm not even sure if I pulled this off correctly!!

Paradox:

Wrapped in steel, barricaded in stone
fearing the fear of being alone.
taken for granted when grants are due
fear the fearing of losing you -

Independent yet needy, take only to give
living to dream yet dreaming to live.
Killing for survival when survival is dead
screaming to speak, silenced instead.

Mask is the face painted in splendor
beauty not outward, inward kept glamor.
Falsifying notions to be kept apart from the rest
beauty not inward when beauty's the best.

Forsake not the wretched, trembling hands feel
ignoring the pain when the wounds won't heal.
Blame the blameless and give victory to the lost
no matter the consequence, no matter the cost.

Tempered yet passionate, if only you knew
fearing the fear of loving you.
Captured the predator who gave up the prey
fear the fearing of keeping you.

©dragonpoe
6/14/07
 
blueangel
Guest


Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:47 am    

Eeeeeeeeeeeeek!!!

Um...right.....wow!

:shock: :-D

So THAT'S where my Dictionary is...you swallowed it!!

Great one, Poe...I, for one, will never match that!!

Love and Hugs

Sally XxX
 
dragonpoe
Guest


Fri Jun 15, 2007 11:34 pm    

I have been known to eat a dictionary or two in my life ;)
Thanks, Sally. You are far too kind.
Love,
~Poe
 
blueangel
Guest


Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:39 pm    

Ok...Paradox is too complificated for me.....Poe...think of something else!!!!! :wink:

XXX
 
dragonpoe
Guest


Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:59 pm    

Scaredy Cat! ;)

Ok, new topic will be......
*grabs dictionary*

oh this is good, reallyyyyyyyy good.
First word to open up to is......
(drum roll please)



TROUBLEMAKER

There you go - new challenge.
 
dragonpoe
Guest


Sun Sep 23, 2007 3:58 am    

*Ok this has been sitting here long enough.. Let's give this a try*

I am such a troublemaker
with my thoughts upon my sleeve
I can't ignore the things I think
or the way I make believe -

That castles grow from rocky shores
and the sun is a star in hand
Or that I have the sea in a cup
And I'm the only gal that you adore...

A wicked glint lights up my eyes
despite how hard I try, I try!
But when it come to you I just
find trouble becomes a must.

Yet I see a certain smile there
and I start to think you might enjoy
the way I play such fancy games
so long as I'm the girl and you're the boy.

Oh, yes I'm a trouble maker
with my thoughts upon my sleeve
I'll live in my castle by the shore
and let you think it's make believe.

©dragonpoe
9/22/07

*ehhhhhhhhhhhh not sure, I wanted to go with whimical and sassy, but I think I fell flat*
 
 
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